Sask Hip Hop Online

AlexanderAye1 · Rookie Joined: 29 Feb 2008 Posts: 128

wrote this after I watched the happening .. . .it stirred up something in me

She’s so abused, hurt, used, treated like dirt
She hates the greed with which he loves to flirt
She leaves first, he’s frustrated; his heads gonna burst
It does, there’s as much blood as there is drugs
The mirror shows us nothing, vampire of love
Vampire of ignorance, so much smoke we don’t know significance
She keeps nukes inside her to keep us alive
Bulimic beauty, global suicide by carbon monoxide
Button pushing fingers, life is art in such a size
Only god sees time history and mistakes as paint
Exposing my sense to the undetected and faint
She’s so mad she’s gonna bypass old restraints
The right people love her, wrong folks discover
Beauty only in money, power, fear, and thunder
The right people are so few can’t stop the plunder
We ride hope like Noah’s ark, afloat alone in the dark

In the end dying alone isn’t punishment
Stars in the skies, we all want some of it
I can’t disguise lies or hide truth inside
Anymore, folk lore and clichés they say…
Bored minds thinking on that slow slow decay
Learning the difference between anger and rage
Danger and recklessness, happiness and the stage
!THE! life is mics at midnight, dislikes and fights
The glare is over now I like things in sight
New eyes new smile old plight old style heart
Wild fun in the run but discipline when I start to march
Scars seal so hard, the different me’s are apart
There’s one for each of them
Variety of chemistry’s makes me selfish by design
Friends pretend but only to get it off my mind
Then again, maybe they love the reactions they find
Paranoia, there’s nothing 100 clicks past that sign…

You don’t get to pick things you lose in the fire
But she already applied her ‘inner-most’ desire
Sell me your nightmares, I’ll pay by making you a liar
Cuz escape is the flowers and birds that follow you
My swings aiight, but I’ve been weak on the follow through
Puddles on the floor, guess its hollow booze
Is there a difference between bruising and breaking the rules?
Never cared, cuz I’m too hardheaded to listen
Cruising on self indulgence like it’s a mission
At least here I can deal with my 3rd eye vision
Call me weak call me a beast, you have my permission
But you can never fucking say my beliefs are superstition
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Ghost · Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:16 am Post subject:

Really good.

Cappo · Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:38 am Post subject:

thats some dope shit alex....second verse was the best for me...

rock on...
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Ghost · Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:26 pm Post subject:

No doubt, re-read it a couple of times...really good, a thinking man's rhyme.

AlexanderAye1 · Rookie Joined: 29 Feb 2008 Posts: 128

werd, cuz my fav hollywood girl is zooey deschnel haah

thanx for feed b ack once again homies!
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your mom · Rookie Joined: 29 Feb 2008 Posts: 168

good job... Razz

AlexanderAye1 · Rookie Joined: 29 Feb 2008 Posts: 128

*pats self on back*
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PhrOzen · Rookie Joined: 29 Feb 2008 Posts: 141

yea , interestin high level mind

the end really caught me tho

Never cared, cuz I’m too hardheaded to listen
Cruising on self indulgence like it’s a mission
At least here I can deal with my 3rd eye vision
Call me weak call me a beast, you have my permission
But you can never fucking say my beliefs are superstition